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A/N: I have so many other things to do, to redo, and such, but I really wanted to write this. I sobbed like a baby writing this, so don't say ...

So hey! I just want to formally introduce myself since I'll be on here a lot more often. Well basically some stuff about me. I live somewhere in the US ...

For a first poem it is actually pretty good. I remember my first was a variation of "Roses are red, Violets are blue." Anyway, the poem doesn't have that certain ...

It is a good topic to write a poem about, however it can throw you off with the lack of punctuation. It flows very well, perfectly with the rhymes, however ...

It's rather interesting, to say the least. It is true and it is horrible, but my opinion is that it can also be beneficial. However for this poem, it is ...

I think I am falling. What's standing, when you fall your whole life. When I land, I know it will hurt. Now I long for it. I want my legs ...

I have to say that I love it. The pain, that's the pain I know so well. Lying to yourself and then you write and the ink becomes your blood ...

To you, my parents. Mother dearest, do not put thy hand on me and tell me to lay down. Lay down and go to sleep. Lay down and be meek. ...

I can feel the emotions coming through. It's neat that you used a letter to form this poem. I like how you ended it with "Someone that misses the real ...

This was very moving. It exposes that, even after the Haitain earthquake, the Haiti people are still not recovered and there is not enough help for anyone. You definitely deserved ...

To be honest, I'm not sure if I like it. It's...alright in some aspects but very cliche in some ways. I can predict the story line from here. The girl ...

If I cussed in this review, then would you know that I really liked it? I did. I loved the flow of it, the feeling of it. Indifference is the ...

It's a rather difficult poem to understand. Punctuation and capitalization need some fixing. I wouldn't use dashes around "By the very ones I gave them to" nor would I use ...

I like the mood and the visual. However, I would like to see more punctuation in it. I know that there is poetic liscense and all, but it's hard to ...

So this was rather interesting. It's a nice love poem and normally I never review love poems. I wouldn't change anything, besides a few nit picky things that I prefer, ...