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Okay this is rather humorous. This is what we all think after heart break, but we never listen. Stupid heart always jumps forward. I think it's rather a cliche poem, ...

Luke~ "Look! I have so many friends..." Luke murmured, oblivious in his happy state. "I never had this many friends before." He looked over at Mark. "Poor him, he's all ...

I do absolutely love it. The lack of structure really draws me to the poem. However the 'falling to pieces' is very cliche. I mean, there is a lot of ...

She sat across from him and hid her face in her hair, a smile playing across her lips as if he'd told a joke. Yes, this was Derrick, the boy ...

I feel bad because I'm technically a stalker (my stalkee knows who I am though) and this poem is serious, but funny. I loved the last stanza. The first one ...

(not really enemies but they do hate each other) ~Mark from Monotony of War~ "WHAT?!" A glass smashed against the wall. "What do you mean you want to have a ...

To my ex girlfriend, may she rest in peace. And she cries. She cries As the rain falls down across her face. She dreams Of sunlight But she can only ...

~Arion from...Arion XD real original title I know~ Arion heard the alarm go off. Wait, what? It was still dark! No, she didn't want to wake up! It was too ...

Now this is awesome. I love it, epecially that you used music for your poem. It's awesome that you got featured! Good job! I reccomend what the others said, but ...

I love the imagery of it, but I don't find this poem creepy or scary. In fact, it was just an ode. Sorry, but if it was creepiness you wanted ...

Haha, feels like I'm in a critical mood lately. I actually do like the poem. (The name should change though, it bugs me now that I read the poem.) I ...

First: CAPITALIZATION, GRAMMAR, AND SPELLING!!!

I don't see anything to change but the die to dies thing, other than a few personal changes. I absolutely love this. This poem is absoluetly great and can relate ...

I don't know what I think. I'm so confused right now, so I'm not quite sure what to say. I like it, I really do. You let the reader draw ...

It's rather interesting to me. I love the flow of it and the description was very good. I like that it was a "dark" theme, but really what is "dark"? ...