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Picture perfect. Eyes so wide. An earnest smile that festers lies. A snake, a shad, A vine, a mask. A doll-faced queen. A masked fiend. Piercing wind. Twisted branch. An ...

I curse you! You are one of the people who wrote something that made me cry. I guess it's because I am close to someone who does this stuff, and ...

As weird as it sounds, I like this style. It's more direct and less formal, which is really interesting to read. I don't agree with gowtham, it IS a poem. ...

Few grammar mistakes but it was very good. I would like to see you build on this and make the idea less subtle. Maybe you should build on the imagery. ...

It's interesting, this event. I liked the flow of it, but you don't need the commas everywhere! It drove me nuts! Commas don't need to go at the end of ...

Wow. Just wow. It's...wow. Okay, besides wow, it's intriguing. Ha! I knew you were messed up! I like it. I like this drabbling. It's cool. I like the irony. I ...

I agree with chibi. A few lengthened lines would make the poem flow a lot better, and it is complain. I also think you should add a period at the ...

First off, I love Mercutio and Benevolio. Heehee that was so awesome. Ben and Merc were my favorite characters in the original play. My suggestion would be to put the ...

I really loved it. I could imagine a little soldier doing this. It sucks that your dad is like that but I guess he's trying to make you a stronger ...

Okay I'm sorry to say but I saw the ending coming. It was so sweet so I guessed something twisted was coming up. I mean, it can't all be about ...

I am a liar. You can see it in these words. They shape me. They make me. And all you can do is assume. I am a statement, boring and ...

Heehee, I liked it. I see why you won. I like the flow you kept and I loved the description. Good job!

Luna~ "This is so not funny," she said to herself, staring at the papaya and prune juice. She was sent to this island for a new survivor series her boss ...

I am ignorant because I state my opinion. I am a liar because I strive to please. I am an idiot because if I wasn't, you'd leave. I am coarse ...

Rather pissed aren't we? Haha, well this is the poem of the decade, what's on everybody's minds know when you think about it. I'm pleased that you kept the pattern ...