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Re: New Eyes.
It is very moving. I liked how you used the concept of colour blindness to show the way that the past distorts your vision. It is very true. When people ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy DT
Deviantart actually has some good artists, it's just that some of them suck. You got to look in the right places.
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: La Petite Mort
I'm a bit twisted, but I love this poem. Part of me wanted to look away, but the part of me that liked it read it again. I liked your ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy DT
Black star is my favorite. YAHOO!!! Him and Tsubaki. But Black star is funny. Especially when he and Soul are running for the hug.
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Walk a Mile in These Shoes then Let's Talk
She walks with her head up tall Through the whispering halls And the gleam in their eyes. See, her secret's out But they don't know shit about They twist her ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Singing Red
Short, sweet and to the point. I read a bit in depth on this and it made me a bit sad reading it. It tells me about loneliness and how ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy *Started*
Name: Akiro Renden Age: 15 Gender: M Type: Death Weapon. He turns into a silver crossbow, nothing fancy about anything else. Rank: Student, Second Star Partner: Valentina Addams (Lion's character) ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Crossroads
Two paths along the beach. One leading away To an ocean much more clear. Then the footsteps leading back. "Remember when" whispers in the trees. All is lost in the ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Sakura and the strange eye
I've never reviewed a picture, but wow! You're very good. I like the veins in the eye, it definitely makes it pop. I'm sad about the shading in Sakura. Oh ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: The spark
It went way too fast. I didn't see the story behind it very well. Actually, I saw the beginning of one, but then you went to the ending. What about ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: A Love to Last Forever
Hi! I hope you're having a nice day because I believe I might ruin that now. I am not a Christian, honestly, but I do feel this way about my ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: The dark before the night
Without darkness there are no dreams. --Karla Kuban, novelist Her hands hold on to the walls, trying to grip the illusion that we call reality. She can feel the ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: I'm Tired
This is a very interesting poem. I really liked the flow of it and I could tell the pain it took to write that. I like the structure of the ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Heartbreak
This sounds cruel, but it sounds rather boring. It's lacking that flavor or substance to a poem. I agree with the first reviewer; it's too short. I would add more ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: I Hate Math... and I Hate the Library
Man, this was actually pretty good! I think you edited it before I read it, and there were no problems with reading it, at least for me. I liked that ...
Sep 15, 2011
