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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: New Eyes.

    It is very moving. I liked how you used the concept of colour blindness to show the way that the past distorts your vision. It is very true. When people ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • OOC Archive Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy DT

    Deviantart actually has some good artists, it's just that some of them suck. You got to look in the right places.

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: La Petite Mort

    I'm a bit twisted, but I love this poem. Part of me wanted to look away, but the part of me that liked it read it again. I liked your ...

    Sep 27, 2011
  • OOC Archive Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy DT

    Black star is my favorite. YAHOO!!! Him and Tsubaki. But Black star is funny. Especially when he and Soul are running for the hug.

    Sep 27, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Walk a Mile in These Shoes then Let's Talk

    She walks with her head up tall Through the whispering halls And the gleam in their eyes. See, her secret's out But they don't know shit about They twist her ...

    Sep 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Singing Red

    Short, sweet and to the point. I read a bit in depth on this and it made me a bit sad reading it. It tells me about loneliness and how ...

    Sep 27, 2011
  • Archive Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy *Started*

    Name: Akiro Renden Age: 15 Gender: M Type: Death Weapon. He turns into a silver crossbow, nothing fancy about anything else. Rank: Student, Second Star Partner: Valentina Addams (Lion's character) ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Crossroads

    Two paths along the beach. One leading away To an ocean much more clear. Then the footsteps leading back. "Remember when" whispers in the trees. All is lost in the ...

    Sep 24, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Sakura and the strange eye

    I've never reviewed a picture, but wow! You're very good. I like the veins in the eye, it definitely makes it pop. I'm sad about the shading in Sakura. Oh ...

    Sep 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The spark

    It went way too fast. I didn't see the story behind it very well. Actually, I saw the beginning of one, but then you went to the ending. What about ...

    Sep 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Love to Last Forever

    Hi! I hope you're having a nice day because I believe I might ruin that now. I am not a Christian, honestly, but I do feel this way about my ...

    Sep 23, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The dark before the night

    Without darkness there are no dreams. --Karla Kuban, novelist   Her hands hold on to the walls, trying to grip the illusion that we call reality. She can feel the ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I'm Tired

    This is a very interesting poem. I really liked the flow of it and I could tell the pain it took to write that. I like the structure of the ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Heartbreak

    This sounds cruel, but it sounds rather boring. It's lacking that flavor or substance to a poem. I agree with the first reviewer; it's too short. I would add more ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I Hate Math... and I Hate the Library

    Man, this was actually pretty good! I think you edited it before I read it, and there were no problems with reading it, at least for me. I liked that ...

    Sep 15, 2011


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster