pandoraswritings

I'm confused. I didn't understand any of this. Pandora

If you feel the need, To smoke the weed, Or smoke some crack, Just know it's whack. Why not come to a peer, And talk instead, And get some help, ...

Thanks guys. I wrote another, with a bit more meaning, so I'd appreciate more critiquing. Pandora

I liked both! Pandora

I read it aloud and it flowed in my head so beautifully! Awesome work! It makes my first poem (I posted today) seem so bad...lol....keep up the great work! Pandora

Sometimes I hurt, And sometimes I lose, But I'll always lie, And say I'm fine. I guess the reason, Why I hold it together, Is for you, For them. They ...

I think this poem was absolutely wonderful! I love how you say "I wish someone would try to break these walls of stone That surround my heart. Then they would ...

Two days had passed since the strange encounter. Mia couldn't help thinking about Danny on the way home from school. She knew she would be in huge trouble if anyone ...

Hey everybody!! finally going to get it on!!! but this one's really short so i could use some help! Chapter Three-Dinner "How was your day dear?" Mia's father, Mr.Smith, asked ...

Hey everybody!! finally going to get it on!!! but this one's really short so i could use some help! Chapter Three-Dinner "How was your day dear?" Mia's father, Mr.Smith, asked ...

I live for the wine of your confusion, the vague insistence of your loyalty. This line really stuck out to me. This was beautifully written, even with the very sophisticated ...

I always pick the name AFTER the ENTIRE story is finished. It makes it easier to decide on a title. And like everyone else said, it is a good idea ...

Another commonly confused word is then/than. Pandora

Loot Next Word please! Funfun! *Claps* Pandora

Could ever ruin somebodys life Wouldn't it be "somebody's"? Why did you lye "lye" is spelled "lie" Other than that, watch the puncuation and keep up the good work! Beautifully ...