pandoraswritings

Face him! Put 'em up crazy stalker!-Jenny What would you do if you were kidnapped? Pandora

This shouldn't be in lyrics, should it? It doesn't sound like a poem, nor is it long enough to be a poem. Try to post thing, maybe, in other poetry. ...

Try not to flood the forums. This is pretty bad, I'm sorry to say. Bad grammar, bad puncuation, makes no sense, and is poorly written. It makes no sense, it ...

Welcome to TYWS! I LOVED the narrator into thingy. It made me laugh. I don't really have a lot of time to critique, but I enjoyed reading this. Although, I ...

Shraz, Welcome to TYWS. I liked this. It was very nice, but it had little meaning behind it. I understand how butterflies are delicate like she was, but I was ...

I like the style you write with. Beautiful.\ Fav. part: "sleep for the moment dream if you can one day you will cease to be " BEAUTIFUL Pandora

Wow! This was AMAZING! I was in awe the entire time I was reading. It is so beautiful! Please please please write more. This sounded so professional and so put ...

You are lacking emotion. What you say may be true, but it is not put in a proper manner. And why is love so crazy? You don't explain that. And ...

Please come Back I'm sorry I am sorry I know this is followed by what they are sorry about, but saying it twice seems very strange. Also, your vocabulary is ...

I found this poem more pleasing to read than the others, but it still lacks that special feeling. It seems like you wrote this just to write it, not because ...

I didn't like this one either. (posted on other of your poems) It has many typos and spelling errors. Fand is right, no one will take you seriously for the ...

I trutsully don't like this. I found little structure to it and it rhymed at times, but did not at others. It was kinda confusing. and take our families away ...

I liked this one. I usually don't read from the fantasy fiction section, but this caught my eye. There may be a few things you want to change, but I ...

Very different. I enjoyed reading this, especially the way the sentences run. I liked the way you used the names he was called. It not only makes you think about ...

You use a lot of adjectives. (not a bad thing, just pointing it out.) I like your story, but it seems a bit middle school are fine, but the way ...