pandora

Wow. That's just lovely. The style is fairly simplistic, but I think that complements the raw emotion of this piece quite nicely. My only complaint might perhaps be that it ...

Not a bad start. I have a fairly good sense of who Maryanne is, her relationship with the narrator, and the setting/context. I agree with Blinky, though, that you're not ...

As you may have guessed, I'm new here (this is the welcome forum, after all =)). My name is Lily, but you can call me whatever you like. I am ...