pandora

5. Leaves of Grass (does a poetry book count?) Don't ask me why, but I HATE Whitman more than just about anything. 4. The Sun Also Rises, by Hemingway. I ...

Hi there! I think you've got a good starting concept, and I really like the idea of the journal type format. But I totally agree with KD here - you ...

Um.... wow. I'm too much in awe to say much of anything. I was so surprised to find out that this was about Greek mythology though! (I didn't read the ...

Hi there. I think this is a good start, and I definitely like your idea. Your intro is very good and (at least for me) draws the reader's interest. Your ...

This is the first item I've posted in a while, so I'm not sure if this is the right place exactly. I could see it fitting in several genres, so ...

I thought this was very interesting. I'm not entirely sure what to make of it, so apologies in advance if my review isn't too helpful! First of all, I really ...

I thought this was a very nice piece. You have lovely powers of description, and your insight into the human condition is both thought-provoking and beautiful. Your personification (I'm not ...

Thank you both for reading! Sorry my response is so late... we had a bad hailstorm and I just got my electricity/internet back a little while ago. Jai - Thank ...

I think starting a war is justifiable if it is used as an ultimate last resort and protects basic human rights, e.g. WW2 (eventually) ended Hitler's genocide against the Jews ...

Victoria inhaled, tightening her fingers against the coolness of the metal railing. Her hair, unburdened by the sea-breeze, snapped around her face with a ferocity befitting the situation. In every ...

Just so you all know, "wife support" is actually called "alimony". In most cases, I can agree that it is probably a load of garbage. But some women give up ...

It's not bad. You seem to have a pretty good feel for dialogue, and your prose successfully creates a feeling of suspense. However, like Angel, I found this pretty confusing. ...

Wow. This is just... wow. I love your metaphors and the way you make this one, specific moment so universal. I don't usually like rhyming poems, but you make it ...

Thank you guys so much for your warm welcome and advice! I read the rules, checked out the debate group and joined; it seems very interesting. I'm sure I'll have ...

There are two issues I have with designer babies. The first is its limitation on personal freedom. By allowing parents complete (or any) control over their children's genetics, we are ...