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This is really cool. I didn't see the original sketch, so I don't know whether it was bad or not, but I definitely think this one is good. On the ...

Okay. Unless anybody has any objections, I declare that we shall start tommorow! Also, let's have only one post for each character a day so that everyone can keep up. ...

Okay. That would be great. :)

I'm just waiting for a few more straight guy characters to make the ratio more even.

I was just looking over the characters and had a few ideas. 1) I think it would be cool if at some point Collin and Preston became friends, because their ...

I've never made a storybook before. What's a DT?

I love this. I agree with the first reviewer in that it feels sleepy, in a good way. Don't change a thing.

This is great, especially if it's your first story. I think it really gives a good picture about black life back then. People always believe it's so easy to overcome ...

This is great. The language was nice. It had a nice sound to it, sharp and clean-cut like the angles on a square. The way you included all of the ...

Name: Logan Warner Age: 16 Grade: 10 Hair: His hair is dark and ropey, worn in short dreadlocks, which hang down just short of his chin. Eyes: His eyes are ...

Name: Jennifer (Jen) Pedersen Age: 14 Grade: 9 Hair: Jen's light auburn hair runs in waves just past her shoulders. She usually has it in a messy ponytail, but when ...

Name: Naomi Shoemaker Age: 14 Parents: Leah Shoemaker and Apollo (Greek version) Appearance: Naomi has chin-length blond hair, with long bangs she's constantly playing around with. Her eyes are a ...

Name: Collin Green Age: 15 Grade: 10th Hair: Collin's hair is dark brownish-black and curly.It's average length and a little untidy, but always impeccably clean. Eyes: His eyes are big ...

Have you ever watch shows like "Degrassi" or "Skins"? They're popular because they're about thinks relatable to people our age: partying, schoolwork, dating, sports, etc. Watching these shows, I reali

I love this. The melancholy, almost wistful tone, is great for a poem about entering hard times. I like the way you used the rabbit as a sort of symbol ...