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Name: Charlotte "Charlie" Eaves Age: 14 (has attended the school since 12) Gender: Female Dormitory: Aviator's Wing Hair: Her hair is a light chocolate brown and softly layered to her ...

12-17 years old

Wizards and witches aren't all contained to Britain. In fact, every country of the planet has witches and wizards. And these witches and wizards need training, education, so that they ...

dropping out

Jakie Mason-Headquarters Alexander has always kind of scared me. So when he strides into the room, I start. But I've got to remain composed. I know everyone here thinks I'm ...

Name: Jade Kianna "Jakie" Mason Age: 11 Gender: Female Code: 2 Power: Jakie can see into peoples' dreams, use them to manipulate them, maybe even to destroy them. She sees ...

Name: Elizabeth (Liza) Irene Turner Age: 15 Gender: Female Personality: Liza isn't really shy, though she's generally quiet. She's not much of a talker. Liza isn't naturally this way: she's ...

*I'm going to post this, but if this spot isn't availible or I need to change anything, just tell me, please. Name: Gracie Baxter Gender: Female Age: 13 Appearance: Her ...

This is really great! It's like you've put into words exactly what I've been thinking forever, and I'm sure a lot of the other writers on here would agree. I ...

In Time, All things become clear Like lambs to the slaughter, the sand draws near, (This should be a period, not a comma.) Forward they charge Cannon blasts at large, ...

Absolutely amazing.

I thought this was great! The revulsion that you're trying to show is practically dripping from the poem. I liked that you used a lot of figurative language: metaphors, similes, ...

I like this for a few reasons: 1. It was short. I don't like reading a poem that's really a novel. Kudos because that isn't a problem here. 2. Your ...

I'm not sure what to say to this. I used to try to make up words. These are funny, though. They sound like something high school guys would say in ...

I really like this. I like the angsty way that you're addressing the world, comparing days that are weighted with problems to those of the beautiful spring. You're having trouble ...