paintingtherain97

They took my cell. They took my beer. They took my ipod. They even took most of my books. Good thing I carry my weed on me. When I show ...

Sierra I immediately check everything out when I get off the bus. The place seems okay, albeit a bit old-fashioned. Better than home, anyway. There's a family standing there talking, ...

Maddie Toupin- Captive It smells like salty fish and body odor. I'm bound by scratchy ropes, and I'm not the only one. There must be a dozen teenagers ondeck, manacled ...

This is great, from the first to last line. I didn't see any grammatical errors, but there are a few things I think you could do to improve upon this ...

This is really good. It has a natural, prose-y feel to it, despite a great rhyme scheme. The title is a little bit childish, but it kind of drew me ...

This is better than anything I could have written, so I'm gonna go the nit-picky route. Sorry. our blood was burnt in a pot on the stove the rats turned ...

*I'd like to post for another character, a male, if you don't mind. If you do mind, I can just delete it. Here is a profile: Name: Samuel Allen Miller ...

posting for updates.

Name: Emily Age: 14 Gender: Female Appearance: Emily is pretty but sickly and exhausted. She has scraggly, white-blond hair, and dull grey eyes. Her frame is tall and skinny, with ...

If a spot for this is unavailable, just tell me and I'll edit or delete. If not, here's a profile. Full Name: Sierra Rose Marsh Nickname: Sometimes she's called SiSi ...

Name: Katherine (Katie) Michelle Turner Gender: Female Age: 22 Appearance: Her hair is thick and dirty blonde. Katie's eyes are hazel. Her skin is pale and lightly freckled, her stature ...

Full Name: Madeleine Toupin Nickname (If any): Maddie Position/Captive: Captive Age (14-19): 16 Gender: Female Appearance (written and picture - no scene - no anime): Maddie is from the slums ...

Can I reserve one of the captive spots?

The chains on pearly white are gone, poof, disappear, allow my teeth to take flight, The orthodontist did right, make the pearl squares adhere, to metal wires so tight. Glove-clad ...

Name: Rachel Wilder Age: 12 Gender: Female Dormitory: Dragon's Heart Hair: Rachel's hair is thin and straight, hanging limp to her mid-back. For this reason, she keeps it up in ...