paintingtherain97

This is kind of a rhymey cutesy poem. I'm not great with poetry, but I think it depends on what you were going for as to how good the poem ...

This one time at band camp, a very evil feline had it out to get me. I'll start from the beginning. The first time I met Mr. Whiskers was at ...

Grammatically, there were only slight comma and hyphenation problems that you could probably find if you looked hard enough and then fix them. As for the important stuff, this story ...

Other than slight grammatical errors, this is great. It preaches feminism in the workplace, instead of the ordinary objectification of women. I love it.

This was vivid to the point of being frightening. I like the way that there are two different stories going on,but there should be a little more connection with the ...

I thought that it was a bit cliche, an old caught-in-your-own-world love story, but the rhyme scheme and overall format is good. Aside from the subject matter, I thought it ...

This is moving. It shows how every sentence a person utters can shape another person's reality. One person talking about another can move people to do anything, even suicide. The ...

I see but do not feel until my dad trudges off to his new house, to his new family, to his new life. Then it comes, in a rush of ...

The first poem,I thought,was easy to relate to but didn't flow very well. Maybe you could break the first few lines in half so there aren't somany syllables. The second ...

This essay is relatable and well-put. I'm hoping to end up an author, but I've wondered for hours and hours about these things before. Whether or not you want to ...

I think it's a bit simple, but the words are choppy and neat. The message is easy to understand and relate to and, overall, this is a good poem. It ...

This is great. It flows well and creates a picture. It took mea few times reading it to understand it, but that happens with all good poetry. The emotion is ...

This is accurate and good but kind of dry. I realize economics are dry and difficult to make exciting, but maybe you could try tospice it up using business metaphors. ...

I thought that this was really pure and full of emotion. I know I sound like a jerk to say it, but the tenses were slightly inconsistent. As for the ...

So I don't understand this yet. What's all the stuff on this website? What are points and badges and everything? I just joined but I'm excited. I love to write. ...