paintingtherain97

This is a good article, but I think that if you worked on it, it could definitely improve and become an even better article. I think the main difficulty you're ...

Thanks for the reviews!

I see with my eyes, so dry from lack of sleep, but do not feel, in my heart and my soul, the way I should, when you tell me. I'm ...

I like the idea. The "don't judge a book by it's cover" theme is relatable and useful in a story. However, I noticed a lot of run-on sentences, and all ...

Structurally, the rhyme scheme and grammar were pretty much perfect. The subject matter was a little... gruesome, but some poetry is somewhat scary to read. It reminds me a bit ...

I love this. Unlike some of the poems of romance I've read, it isn't pretentious and cliche. This is real and somewhat of a riddle until you read it through ...

I loved it! It was so raw and real and full of feeling, way better than anything I've ever written. I noticed some errors in grammar, just little typos. For ...

I thought this was a pretty good poem. I liked the imagery, but when describing things like the sunset, it would be more interesting if you used words like "crimson" ...

I thought this was interesting. Things I liked: the use of imagery, the emotion, and the spirituality. I liked the imagery because it was vivid. You could kind of see ...

This is really good. I liked the way each layer of the onion represented different shames. It's clever. Also, the ending was good, I thought. Other people might not like ...

Thanks for the reviews. I'll work on it. And I like Journey. I've never really watched Glee, but a lot of my friends do.

This is probably one of the best pieces of writing I've seen on here so far. Not only could I not find errors in grammar, but the imagery you used ...

Thanks.I already sent it into the contest, though. I'll remember that for my next story though. Feedback is appreciated.

I liked this. It's pretty difficult to make a construction report exciting, but the way you added interesting facts here and there made it good. There were a few fragments ...

I liked this. It's pretty difficult to make a construction report exciting, but the way you added interesting facts here and there made it good. There were a few fragments ...