paintingtherain97

In the land of white trash, there was a boy who gave a crap. His name was Martin E Nash, and he just wouldn't shut his trap. When the kids ...

I like the way this is told in story form instead of an essay type of thing. It's creative and makes it all the more interesting. I was actually thinking ...

The grammar thing is basically just how in some sentences, you capitalized words that weren't at the beginning. It might have been intentional and it's poetry, so grammar isn't a ...

This is good! It summarized well the absurdist ideas, as well as the main idea of the story. This is organized, grammatically well-done, and accurate. I liked it because it ...

I see with my eyes, so dry from lack of sleep, but do not feel, in my heart and my soul, the way I should, when you tell me. I'm ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone. I'll work on the poem some more.

I like this poem. It's unique and sort of riddled. I like your word choice and the rhythm of the whole thing. Unfortunately, there were a few basic errors and ...

This is okay. I liked the rhyming and the light, funny subject matter, although the grammar needs some work. All in all, it could be better and could be worse. ...

I see with my eyes, so dry from lack of sleep, but do not feel, in my heart and my soul, the way I should, when you tell me. I'm ...

Nice song. I like the message about love, although this is kind of short and repetative. I think you should maybe add a few more lines or something so it ...

This is pretty good. The rhyme scheme was a little off-beat, and you should maybe double-check for grammar stuff but I liked the poem. Is it about that guy who ...

It's not bad. I liked the way you were able to describe depression and the way it feels like it will never get better. I did see a lot of ...

Ha! I liked this. It's catchy and funny. I didn't see any bad grammar or anything either. Not bad.

I like this a lot. The off-and-on rhyming appeals to me. Also, I love the line about the march of the poet. I can really relate to it, like most ...

This is absolutely amazing! I love it. The rhyme scheme is great, the meaning is good and relatable, and the ending is solid. I'm not sure that I have anything ...