paintingtherain97

This is pretty good. There's strong emotion and a clear opinion in this, which inmakes people think. After all, that is what writing is about. But I do think that ...

I like this. There are some tiny nitpicky things, like in one instance where you substituded the word "were" with "where" and another where you had a run-on, although run-ons ...

Thanks. And I love Degrassi! Are you talking about Riley?

This poem explains exactly why I'm agnostic. Lol. There were a few spelling mistakes and everything, but I liked the meaning of the poem. It was a bit ranty and ...

This is good. It's powerful, too. Sometimes, your stanzas can be a bit lengthy, but I think if you had an older, more patient audience, this would not be a ...

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I'm crouched down in a pouncing position, like a panther. The grayish blue pebbles in front of me are painted chalky white, and I zone in on the dilapitated line ...

Every time his parents fought, he ate more than he ought. For his emotions he was not ready, so in gym he got too sweatty. Although he wore a happy ...

This is good. I like the message of it, and though the rhyme scheme is slightly irregular, the overall rhythm isn't all that bad. Overall, this is good, and I ...

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I'll work on it.

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This is good. I like your descriptions of everything. They were pretty J K Rowling-ish. And I like that you explained why you desire what you desire. I entered this ...

I love this! I like how you describe yourself as the ice ream and the fruits as life experiences, sweet and sour. That's creative. I didn't see anything grammar-wise but ...

This is pretty depressing, but that isn't necessarily bad. I think to make it more interesting and to make the reader really feel it, though, you should maybe use some ...