paintingtherain97

Everyone has felt. Every day, it seems, there are sorrows and plights, jokes and smiles, things that rile your anger until it seems that you will explode if you do ...

These are good. I really liked the first one. There were a hell of a lot of similes. The message is really relatable, too, trying to figure out the standards ...

Not bad. The flow and syllabic balance was good. I think you could spice it up with some metaphors, though. Angry people tend to be red-faced and indignant. You could ...

This is good. You can definitely feel the raging insolence of Holy teachings, the angst and the anger at what should not be. The flow is good, and the emotion ...

As you watch the last light of your miserable life blink out, you are plunged downward, descending into the most horrid depths of evil, the lake of fire, Hell. There ...

This is beautiful. It talks about a topic that people try to ignore too much. The emotion in it is real, and it is unique in its truthfulness. The capitalization ...

This is great!!! It's exactly how I feel a lot of the time, complex and hard for even me to understand. I like this. I think I saw one little ...

You look at me, through weary eyes full of prejudice; you see what you expect to see. To you, I am the girl with a short temper, the girl with ...

This is good. You can sort of feel the awkwardness and discomfort and everything of the person at the operating table. The rhyming is good, but when you're rhyming you ...

This isn't bad. The picture goes nicely with the poem. I don't really understand why it wasn't in stanzas and stuff. The setup made it seem a bit like a ...

Wow. This is pretty depressing, but I guess I should have guessed that looking at the title. I'm gonna try this in list format. Pros: - The imagery is fantastic ...

I'm not gonna lie. This is pretty awesome. At first, the word awesome seemed overused and bugged me, but this was pretty funny and had a good message about being ...

Not bad. The title is a bit misleading. It makes it sound like it's gonna be another sappy breakup poem when it's actually something way better and more real. If ...

This is great. It really describes how it feels when you have writers block, like a story is building up inside of you, but it can't seem to find its ...

Dad Smith was a classic father: high-paying job and aloof manner, didn't pay his family much bother, but liked his secretary, who was blond and tanner. Mom Smith felt kind ...