packmasterk2

I read a lot of vampire stories these days because of the twilight saga "gold rush" but, as you stated, your story as nothing to do with the saga. Also ...

I like it. Its very interesting but i have to agree with mars, a lot of details do make a story a little boring. And before you post just spell ...

very interesting, but im not totally clear on everything. for one thing, and not to be rude or anything, is this from a girl or a boys point of veiw? ...

I've read a many vamp tales in my time but this seems like it might be the best. there's just one thing to remember: make sure you have a plot. ...