originalhobbit

All of these drawings are pretty good, (better than I've ever done), and the graininess doesn't bother me much. Overall, I think the best parts of all of them are ...

My guard is always up, it's true, but that's only because I've been trained that way. I can never let things in too deep, or they might burn me. I'm ...

Suddenly I'm feeling the blame, all I see is the blood all over my hands. I want out of it, I can't handle it. I need to destroy the evidence. ...

These are awesome photos, I love the sunsets. My favorite is the one with the bird.

Possession, fear, reassurance in love, are things said to come for me from the ones above. I don't know the truth in these things I'm told, I just want to ...

Yet again, I'm up too late doing nothing specific, just lying awake. I try to force sleep to overtake me. I stare at the clock as it strikes five, and ...

Everyone knows the name of my home, the land of stars and palms. And everyone wishes to come here someday, to make a name and home of their own. As ...

I love the advice, and I'll definitely take it into the consideration. The only reason this poem doesn't have a specific rhythm to it is because I was trying to ...

I really like that the poem isn't entirely happy. I think it makes the words seem more real and less forced.

I'm glad you can't see how much I've died, Or all the sleep I've lost. My regrets have run deeper than I knew they could, Since I walked out on ...

Ink is the greatest medium, Widely misunderstood. Because it can show all true things, Though not all of them whole or good. Anything can come of it. of course, mistakes ...

I like the repeating pattern and the good rhymes.

I feel it growing, waiting to come out. I avoid it, deny it, totally ignore it, until it can hardly be controlled. Then the words come out, the accusations, like ...

How should I start it? I don't want a plot, because I have one. I'm just looking for an attention-grabbing first paragraph. I would like more advice on writing as ...

Thanks for the good reviews and constructive criticism. I wasn't expecting people to like this, since it was an experiment of mine, but I appreciate that it was well-received