originalhobbit

This has a really great message and I think this problem needs to be addressed more. That being said, I have to agree with the reviewers above and the changes ...

Yeah, almost all of the swearing in this is completely unnecessary. This would have been much better without it. other than that, there's not too much wrong with it, and ...

This is really creative and funny, very entertaining. I like how direct it is, how it addresses the reader. The concept is also really unique, I've actually never seen a ...

Normally, I don't like things that are overly wordy, but I really liked this. The first stanza is especially good, I like that it uses humor to sort of lighten ...

Thanks for all the great reviews. Now, for some clarification: this poem is really about my home, It's about California. Specifically, it's about the fame and infamy that Southern California ...

My characters talk to me sometimes, but, like others, they mainly talk to each other. I do tend to have conversations with them when I am under high stress though, ...

I think this is great. Definitely something many can identify with. I loved the Italy/Spain thing, very creative.

This is pretty good, I like how it is written. It's very relatable, I'm pretty sure at one point or another, someone has had the idea of tolerance forced upon ...

I liked this. It's just the right length and I liked the language you used (especially that you used "sauntered off" ).

Good poem, excellent twist. I can honestly say I did not see that one coming, even if I may have felt the same way about my Internet connection before. Onto ...

I agree with everyone else, this is short, but sweet (cliche, I know, but there's no other expression I could use). I really like the format and the whole idea ...

It's a good poem, and at first I thought it was a metaphor as well. I really liked the part about it being proud, that was a great line.

The is excellent. At your age I don't think I could have written anything with this much depth. I really, really like how much emotion was put into this, and ...

This is very good, I like the length of it the best. Very short and to the point.

My mind, It is conflicted. I can't tell left from right. And I need some time to process what has been brought, recently, to light. My thoughts, They contradict my ...