originalhobbit

This is great. I really like the line about being a vigilante and the rhyme scheme. This is a very fun poem.

Thanks for all the tips and criticism, much appreciated. I am going to edit my grammar mistakes (which previously went unnoticed, so thanks for that.) and I will be continuing ...

Make no mistake when you attempt to Gouge out our tongues For each one is a Thousand tongues of fire. So we shall summon the scorch of the Hyena of ...

This is really, really, good. I love the third stanza, it's definitely my favorite. This definitely deserves a feature.

I actually planned on expanding this, at least by a few chapters. I was going to have him buy Trevor as a Christmas present for himself.

(This is my first real attempt at fan fiction, tell me if it's any good) Neville Longbottom nervously dragged his trunk through the King's Cross station, unsure where he was ...

This was better than I thought it would be, a lot better. I like that the theme was realization instead of jealousy and paranoia. Sometimes, the realization that someone has ...

Today I'm finally going to do it. I'm going to open the door, Show them the real me. Today is the day I've feared, Ever since I discovered myself. Ever ...

I got grade level 5 and a readability level of 74. The problem? My excerpt is from the novel I'm just starting, which is going to have quite a bit ...

It's been three long years. We've wasted them away. All our worries and flaws have held us back. It's been three long years. We've tried to make it forever. All ...

Yeah, I'm sort of lyrically challenged. I can do choruses well enough, but if you ask me to do a bridge, that's probably not going to yield good results.

This is great, I think it would work well as a skit, it's very funny. I liked it.

This is great, it totally made my day. I love how cocky Harry is, and how the posts are in chronological order, it's a nice touch. My favorite post has ...

I like how, in the beginning of the story, Jesus actually does come off as creepy. I think this was a really creative story. I just have one nitpicky thing ...

I agree with the reviewers above. This is pretty good, but the mistakes are distracting, to say the least. I would go in and take the time to highlight them, ...