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Re: Waiting...
Hey I liked your poem a lot! :elephant: It was very simple and that's what I liked about it. :) :D
Tue May 15, 2007 2:47 am -
Re: A few of my favourites.
These pictures are really good! :D Great job I loved the one with the girl in the dress and the moon! :D that one and all were amazing! Great! :elephant:
Mon May 14, 2007 1:33 am -
Re: Black Umbrellas
I loved this song a lot! Great Job! :) except one little thing: Weren't is spelled wrong in the sentence ' If only we wern't caught on this wave.' Great ...
Mon May 14, 2007 1:28 am -
Re: Tending to the flowers.
WOW! :shock: I love this drawing! Great job! It is cool that people put art on here too! Great job! :) :elephant:
Mon May 14, 2007 1:22 am -
Re: Horror
It is one minute before twelve and everything is in a deep, disturbed silence. Thirty seconds have passed from when it first struck a minute before twelve. Beads of sweat ...
Sun May 13, 2007 11:37 pm -
Re: August Rain
This was good. :) Your description was very good. It didn't grab me that firmly but it was pretty good. Great Job.
Sun May 13, 2007 10:44 pm -
Re: Mystery on the Nile
Great story! I love your work! :D Keep up the awesome work!
Sun May 13, 2007 10:27 pm -
Re: Betrayal
WOW! :shock: This describes basically the "friendship" I had last year with a rich kid at my school. Good job! :) I am loving your writing and can't wait to ...
Sun May 13, 2007 10:25 pm -
Re: Fairytale
Wow! :shock: good job! I really liked this poem! Excellent description and I love the part where you were talking about the black hole and the shovel of grief! wooo! ...
Sun May 13, 2007 10:20 pm -
Re: Good Riddance
Good description on this! :D I really liked it! I felt the point that you were trying to make well done! :) Keep it up!
Sun May 13, 2007 10:17 pm -
Re: our familiar lady.
good description in this :) Are you going to be starting something with this or is it just going to be a paragraph? :? But good job on describing things ...
Sun May 13, 2007 10:15 pm -
Re: A short-short story of mine
Great description. :o I don't really know if you're trying to start something or if its a paragraph though. :?
Sun May 13, 2007 10:11 pm -
Re: The House
WOW!!! :shock: GREAT JOB! I loved it! I am very excited to hear more of this. :D Great job on describing things it was wonderful I can't say anything else ...
Sun May 13, 2007 3:17 pm -
Re: College Rule
I liked this a lot. The thing I liked the best was how you described things. :) This is the first one that I have read but I would like ...
Sun May 13, 2007 3:05 pm -
Re: Poem
The delicate flower blowing in the breeze, Filled with vibrance and busy bees The soft white petals just rippling along As the wind strums a soft, beautiful song Until you ...
Sun May 13, 2007 2:53 pm
