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Wow you ended it at the correct time I agree! Good descriptions! I really liked it! :elephant:

how cute! :) I can understand that you wrote it awhile ago! It was short, very short! anyway I liked it a lot! :elephant:

Good poem! :) Did you write this or did you take it from somewhere? Because at the bottom it say taken from a book title (I forgot the name!) Well ...

First off good poem! :) I think maybe having the three periods at the end of things might be a little weird! I personally think the stew thing isn't fitting ...

I liked this poem! I love those little magic eight ball thingys! anyway good poem! :) Great job! :elephant:

Hey I liked this poem! I think you need punctuation! that's an important thing! I liked the idea that you mixed and matched things from Hollywood films! good job :elephant:

good description! :) I love this piece! Great job! :D :elephant:

wow! :shock: I love your poems! they're great everytime! :) Wonderful job and good description! Well done :elephant:

I really liked this poem! :) It was very cute! It was kinda trying to describe history I liked it a lot :D Good Job! Keep it up! :elephant:

This was pretty good! :) I liked it. :D It didn't really catch my eye though. Maybe when trying to do work like this put in an event unless your ...

This is a really good poem! :) I liked it a lot! I got your point really well. Great job on not overdoing punctuation and words. :D :elephant:

Great poem! :) I liked it! Didn't I tell you that I would critique some of your work. wa la I am here! :elephant:

I loved this! :D Good description and I certainly liked it a lot! :) Good Job! :) :elephant:

Good Luck! :) I hope your story can get read and maybe published. :D Good luck again :elephant:

Is this a story or just an update on what is going on with your book? :? :)