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hello! I think this poem had a good concept. I liked it. Good job and I love your poems btw! :elephant:

These were really cool. I liked the dino dino dino the best! :D

WOW! I really liked this! Good description! um...I think maybe you need a little more punctuation but except for that great poem! :elephant:

Hey! Tell your friend that I thought that it was really good! I liked the concept 'we're all wearing masks' that was really good. Great job! :elephant:

Hey :) It was kind of odd in the beggining I agree with Chevy, but it got better! Good job! :D :elephant:

Hello whence! :) I liked the poem just that you need punctuation. ok well that's it. good job! Keep it up! :elephant:

Ummm.....:huh: I didn't really get this poem. I would work on the punctuation on this you tend to put commas after every line and then periods at the end of ...

Hi! :) I liked this a lot! I thought the last paragraphs were the best but the beginning was a bit abrupt I agree. Well Great job anyway and keep ...

Hi! :) This is soooo incredibly awesome! Great job! I also want to see the whole pic on #3. Looking forward ot more! :elephant:

WOW :shock: this is a great piece of work! I loved it! :D You're a good artist great job and keep it up! Looking forward to seeing more from you! ...

Hey :) Good Poem I liked it a lot :elephant: I especially liked the part where it said: The lost girl, meets the found boy, looking in the lost and ...

I agree with Incandescence. You could seriously get people wrong ideas about this because of talking about Christianity. The language was ood. It wasn't my fav :(

Cool! I liked them all but my faves were the 2nd and 4th ones Good job :) :elephant:

Hi! :) good poem. But I am going to have to say that the last too paragraphs were confusing Well anyway good job!

Hey LD! :) I've always loved reading your poems! This one was good too! I like how you describe things and how you take a verb or something and make ...