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I walked in to my school and couldn't help to look at a group of people surrounding a wall. I walked over to take a look at what it was... ...

Snow is falling all around, Snow is all over the ground. Making a blanket over everything it sees, Soft and crunchy over all of the trees. When the children go ...

GREAT! These are great! I have read I think all of the ones recently posted! :D

good job again! you are doing really well on these! :D

good poem. I really enjoy these. I am looking forward to another one if there is going to be one. Great job! :D

This was a great small piece of writing. I liked it very much. Maybe make it a little longer if you want to turn it into a story or something. ...

Wow great story starter I think! you should most definitely make a story out of this! Great Job! The description was very good about the alley I loved it! :D

It was really good :D I liked this story a lot and the picture was funny :lol:

This was good. I liked it. I do think it was a little quick though. It was really good and I enjoyed it a lot. :D

This is great! I have been reading these, they are very good. Very good description and good job on relating to single mothers trying to find a good man. Great ...

I liked this a lot. :D you should make it a story and add more to it. I would definitely read it and I am sure that a lot of ...

Is this a song? I think that there is a lyric part of this website but I don't know I am new. The words are good. If it was a ...

Wow that would make a great story starter! you should totally start a story with that! I loved the points you made with the story and ya it was really ...

Awesome! This was intense and almost real! I really enjoyed reading this piece. Great description and words and a great point that you are making about good and evil. Keep ...

There is a very good point here. I like the way you described it. Maybe you should probably find another way to show you are really serious about certain parts ...