oregongirl

Hi Claudette! :) Great job on this piece of writing! Great description on everything! I didn't see any mistakes. I thought that you really told the story like it was ...

Wow! this was so awesome I absolutely loved it! goood job magicman keep it up! ML, Demi

I liked this chapter and I can't wait for more! I'll be the way I loved the description.. Love ya! Demi :D

wow sure is a little depressing but I liked it. Good job! :) ML, Oregongirl

This was an interesting story and I really liked it a lot. I definitely can't wait to hear Chapter 2! Great job Timea! Love ya, Demi

Hi I liked the poem but I think that you should fix the things that the people described above. Here was my favorite part: As the sun paints Beautiful hues ...

well I believe kitty and snoink covered mostly the whole thing. Um..I liked how you described most of the things and yes you did change tense but it didn't really ...

Once there was a tribe of Native American Indians. Their tribe name was Aranck (meaning “stars”). The chief’s name was Chaakmongwi and he had a son named Enapay. Enapay married ...

I liked this poem. I thought it was very good. Maybe describe more and make it a little longer I don't know. Well good job! ML, Oregongirl

These are awesome I loved them! Good Job! See ya around! Demi/OG/oregon

I liked this piece. I think that you should put more commas in and punctuation. Well good job this could be a great piece with a few touch ups... ML, ...

I loved these photographs! :D Great Job! I especially like the second one. I don't know why but I liked it! Good job! Demi/OG/oregon

OMG! Hey PN! I am looking sooo forward to reading the story! It sounds so awesome! Well I can't wait to hear the rest! Love ya, ML, Oregongirl

WOW these were amazing! I loved how you did the faces and they were sort of life like! Good job! ML, oregongirl

I liked this piece! Good Job! ML, Oregongirl