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Bsically I have thesame thoughts as everyone else; this is a good story but there are many awkward sounding words and combinations that take away from the experience. Like "leaved" ...

I like this idea but I have just a few suggestions. before the flash back I think you might want to have something that triggers it instead of her listening ...

Wow, I want to give critique for this but I can't really find anything to critique so I'm just going to have to say, nice job and keep it up.

I love how you transitioned between people so well and defined their characters so clearly. You were even able to change your writing style to represent this change. The only ...

This part was pretty good too, although, I think that you should get rid of some of the "had"s they sort of take away from the overall flow of your ...

Thanks, it took me a while to do this one and those descriptions were kind of new for me.

Nice essay, but I think you should rearrange the structure of it a little bit. For example, in the opening paragraph try to summarize everything you're going to say in ...

Okay, before I start I am very biased, I dislike love poems with a passion, but this gave me some hope. It lacked the corny, "I will love you forever", ...

Seeing as how I'm a pessimist, I love this poems idea and would like to say that, in terms of ideas it was pretty cool. I don't agree with the ...

Well, although I usually don't like this type of thing, this was pretty good. By the way, is this continued or is this the only one?

Olenus flies a little too close to the sun :wink:

Hey, this was an article I wrote a couple of months ago, check it out if you want.

PG-13 for gruesome scene at the end. Within the city of Niva, form manipulation, an occult art founded by the philosopher Truneaus based on Plato’s theory of forms, rose to ...

PG for a little violence and obscenity. Premise: In the 21st century the earth was screwed up, overtime, however, the earth got even more screwed up; global warming accelerated at ...