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Its coming out May 8th of this year.

This is a poem I wrote a very long time ago, back in middle school; in fact I had trouble recognizing it because I don't write like this anymore, at ...

This story is good because it grabs your attention and seems to be leading somewhere interesting; I hope you have more to come.

Interesting story, though I think you should edit and reread it for some awkward wording and dialogue. "chestnut colored eyes" could be "chestnut eyes" "what you were" could be "were ...

Welcome to YWS. Please do not be alarmed by the ranting dwarves or the ferocious dragons and have a nice day.

This book was awesome, I especially liked the end. :wink:

I would love to critique this and what not, but its already really good, so nice.

Welcome to YWS, hope you enjoy your stay.

The person in my avatar is Agito from Air Gear. Air Gear is a perverted anime and I usually despise stuff like that but the story line is so good ...

I generally write stuff involving sci-fi and fantasy, although my sci-fi story seems to be alot better than the fantasy.

There were alot of punctuation mistakes, as already pointed out, but the thing that got me is that it, to me, felt like it was a bit choppy, sort of ...

This series is awesome, he is so good at making cliff hanger ends to, not only his books, but his chapters. It keeps you hooked, check it out.

Can someone please give me some help with comparitve differentiation, as in differentiation with shapes?

Well, I've been active on the forum for a little bit now but I forgot to introduce my self so...yeah. Well, basically I'm a teenager who gets drowned with homework ...

Cool story, I really can't say anything bad about it so the only feed back I can give are things about the wording of some phrases. Please tell me if ...