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A Peasant’s Reassurance ‘Because a true king looks toward the sky, Though some revolt and others conspire, A true king will never die. That’s why he’ll always try, Try never ...

*applauds* I like this story, idea and all. The only changes I recommend are a few puctuational and grammatical thing, unless of course some of those mistakes are part of ...

This is nice; the only thing that I would suggest is that you make the haikus flow more with each other because it seemed to me that they were all ...

Center of Attention A lush green forest, drowned in dawn’s golden glow. Wind filtering through the trees, causing the leaves to dance. A small bird awakens, it’s nut brown feathers ...

Well, its basically about a kid with asthma who has sort of been chosen to wield a blade. The kid lives on earth but there is a parallel world in ...

Mortal Engines is basically about a futuristic world in which people can no longer live on land simple because it is too desolate; certain continents, like America are completely abandoned ...

I read that book earlier this year and, though some parts of it were corny, it was pretty good overall. It expressed things in a realistic way and didn't make ...

This series was made by Garth Nix, who is also the writer of the Abhorsen Trilogy as well as Shades Childred. It is an awesome series so far and the ...

I loved this series; I read the entire thing and am kind of sad its over. I have also started the Demonata series though that one isn't as good.

So far this is pretty good; good plot, good character development, good mystery and even good tantalizers.

This story is good so far; you have developed all of your characters as well as their relationships well. I would reccomend spacing and getting rid of extraneous comments: The ...

Alright; thanks.

Can anyone show me how to properly integrate quotients such as (2X^4 - X^5)/64

Thanks for the critique Zen; also the description actually does play a role in the story, specifically the end.

Though there were spelling mistakes, such as "getle" it was a good idea.