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This is a really good story but I think that you should try to get into the point of view of the new girl more so that we can sympathize. ...

Well, other than a few typos, this is a really good story. It's not corny and it gets straight to the point. :)

AAAAH. Why is it that, out of all the people that I have talked to who read this book, only my English teacher and I actually like it!?

Thanks for the critiques. I'll try to use less big and/or unneccessary words next time I write and I'll try to make my topic more clear. Also, J., the essay ...

Wow, this part is extremely good. I can't really find any errors that disturbed the flow of your story so good job. By the way, for the second part did ...

Europe Screws Everything Up Authors utilize a variety of tools in order to drive their literatures plot. Of the variety of tools at their disposal authors often choose to use ...

It's a pretty good story but there are some structural and grammatical mistakes that interfere with the understanding of the story. "They have started to fight" This part is completely ...

I like some of the ideas in this poem buut the thing is, I think there are too many. When you have more than one main idea in something you ...

Um, Whence said that syllable length was optional and I missed the last line when I was copying and pasting it from the contest thread. Here it is complete. Meaning: ...

This is a nice beginning. It sets things up so that people have alot of questions as to what is going on and they are hoping that later parts of ...

This poem is awesome; I can't really think of anything wrong with it. Good rhythm, good topics and nice twist at the end. Good job :)

This is the ciniquain I am entering into the contest which I am sure to win. :roll: Meaning: Essential, illusory. Tantalizes, Captivates, Absconds. It is insensibly sought.

Thanks for the comments guys; I edited my poem to try to follow some of your advice but I couldn't follow all of it because it would interrupt with my ...

I think that this is a really cool poem. The repetition worked beautifully but I do agree that a new image might be needed. (I do thesame thing my self ...

This is a cool poem; one thing I reccommend would be what others have, a better rhyme scheme. It also seems to me that you should try to split of ...