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Re: Chapter 1.2 - A Tale of Two Songs
Hi, thank you so much. With the narration thing, when I uploaded it, a lot of the italics bits got erased for some reason. I%u2019m not sure why but I ...
Apr 7, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 1.1 - A Tale of Two Songs
Hi! Thank you so so much for the review. I probably should have changed that town vs village part BAHAHA. However I am so glad that you still enjoyed it ...
Apr 7, 2021 -
Re: Chapter One - A Tale of Two Songs
Thank you so much for the feedback! I have actually ended up changing the majority of the aspects of this chapter into something else, as this was sort of zero...draft? ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: Chapter One - A Tale of Two Songs
Thank you so much! I absolutely agree with your points. I honestly was going to scrap the whole Levi thing, it came out of nowhere when I was writing. I ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: Chapter One - A Tale of Two Songs
Thank you so much for the feedback! I do have an issue with making sentences too long. I haven't really edited anything yet so it's going to be pretty bad ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 2]
Not at all. It feels very original so far! Plus, the rag-tag group is a very popular trope so there's no need to worry
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 2]
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Jan 3, 2021
My comment glitched and I don't know how to delete it, so please ignore this!!