orbiteliza

Hi, thank you so much. With the narration thing, when I uploaded it, a lot of the italics bits got erased for some reason. I%u2019m not sure why but I ...

Hi! Thank you so so much for the review. I probably should have changed that town vs village part BAHAHA. However I am so glad that you still enjoyed it ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! I have actually ended up changing the majority of the aspects of this chapter into something else, as this was sort of zero...draft? ...

Thank you so much! I absolutely agree with your points. I honestly was going to scrap the whole Levi thing, it came out of nowhere when I was writing. I ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! I do have an issue with making sentences too long. I haven't really edited anything yet so it's going to be pretty bad ...

Not at all. It feels very original so far! Plus, the rag-tag group is a very popular trope so there's no need to worry

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