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thanx for all them opinions they helped alot! its god to knw what u guys thot cuz now i can go and improve my work. the storyline is kind of ...

lol it is a typo ..it's meant to be ' in it' , thanx for pointing it out il soon ammend it, i do want to write futher upon this ...

you raise a valid point, war is exactly as you describe and bloodshed is inevitable, however, the reasons behind ti can be questioned, firstly the war on afghanistan, over 9/11 ...

Once there was a house, Pink roofed and cracked walls within. The path twisted and turned, The fence splintered passers by and the chimney never worked. One there was a ...

I had never seen him so weak, so out of control. As he walked towards me I saw through his eyes, the still stare told his story. I knew what ...

Lol firstly apologies for the spelling, but compared to the matter I was writing upon it seemed futile to me. I wasn’t as cautious as when I was writing my ...

an excellent point rasied Qi ! america is demanding other countries (frm which it fears the exsisence of a terrorist views) to rid of nuclear wepons yet the usa is ...

thanx triona good to get some responce, and cheers for mentioning them i's lol xxx

i really enjoyed reading that, its such a good piece ! its the kind of thing dat makes u wnt to read on, and in my opinion dat is an ...

yea i've got a mobile phone...samsung d500...very cool has loads of new feaures and stuff...i was never realy into mobiles but gt this one on contract so didnt cost me ...

hey, im onsa from england, uk....was browsing net and found this forum, its very cool indeed getting an opinion on a piece can be so difficult at times. im posting ...

hey every1! im onsa...or Oz..wichever lol erm ive always loved to read and hav been writing since i was little...havnt yet completed a whole piece but hoping to do so ...

hey, im onsa from england, uk....was browsing net and found this forum, its very cool indeed getting an opinion on a piece can be so difficult at times. im posting ...