oneeyedunicornhunter

Clothes are to hangers as posters are to walls.

"I haven’t seen my dad in seventeen years. I never will again." Everything else is in past tense, this should be "hadn't". Other than that, It wasn't too long, like ...

Please read the rules, LOSTie...you are supposed to have 2 reviews for each work you post. You have no reviews, and it appears this isn't your only work posted here.

Very favorite is the "Aim for the head" with the suit. *Nuck-nuck-nuck*...I love twisted humor. Don't worry...I'm procrastinating as we speak. It's like Ellen DeGeneres said: Don't put it off...procra

The things which could be improved: The bottom beak looks kinda funky...I don't mind the long tongue though. The neck looks more furry than feathery, and it gives it a ...

Not really much to say after CL's post...she covered all the grammatical errors, which there were quite a lot of. I liked the way you phrased certain things, but as ...

Hahaha! Very clever ending. :D I would rephrase some of the things, just a little bit of editing, nothing big. For example: "I wasn’t buying it one bit. Laughing coldly, ...

Wow niccy...that IS bad... :shock: A lot of things can be found again and again throughout sci-fi and fantasy, and I can list three books that are the main source ...

*growls like white tiger* ^ Punctuation! Please punctuate before I punch your face! Sorry. Just having a bit of fun...But seriously, it is important. I can't tell where one sentence ...

The cars rush by The other children fly To each open car door. Perhaps you meant to say "To open each car door"? And it should be "dread", not "dred". ...

Sig says it all. ;)

Does anyone know how much weight the words add to the dictionary?

I will finish after you, or my (user) name isn't Oneeyedunicornhunter! :lol: All nighters rule. I'll probably need a few supplies in order to pull it off, though... 1-Several energy ...

Coffee

Ahhh! Tricky one. :) Took me a minute to get the second half. I'm hungry for cheese and mashed potatoes. ______ Ger Firsh end nullteply!