oneeyedunicornhunter

hmm i could imagine that being a song... but there wasn't really much about it that blew me away. it was okay, but next time really try to make your ...

i think the admin has to. oh well. yeah, sythe was right. this should be in the welcome part, not poetry. unless that WAS your poem... o.0

AHH please separate the paragraphs. i'll read it if you do, i pwomise!

hmm let's see...you had some sentence errors, or at least things that should be improved or changed. as an introduction to the plot, this was actually really good. i don't ...

KENPACHI MASAMUNE ACTUALLY POSTED SOMETHING OTHER THAN A HEARTLESS CRITIQUE! i'm shocked. as for the story...i will...grudgingly say was pretty funny. Your humor was pretty clever. by the way kenpachi

this was okay, i especially liked this part: "you come home four out of five days: crying, Nervous breakdowns are taking over, " the way you separate it makes me ...

good poem, really liked it! but the ending was a bit rough. I cannot change the voice of my heart (i would change "cannot" to "can't" But I can silence ...

COOL i love this series i'm in! age: 68 sex: male appearance: short but strong, rugged-looking black beard, bald, dark eyes status: brown dragonrider dragon: Jorenth (everone else should stick ...

ooo this looks fun! NEW CHARACTER 30y/o man, balding, fit, a swimmer, is infected(or will be in just a bit)! and he's still in his speedo! :lol: name's Keven Klyde ...

i would post a comment, but after reading that, i'm too scared. OH NO! TOO LATE! okay, fine, i'll comment. That was really original, and even though i didn't know ...

i once found a unicorn hair in my McHeart Attack On A Bun. I've never had fast food since. in fact, i'm now a vegetarian. YAY VEGES!

hmm..i liked the emotion of this one. the rythm was good. the rhyming was okay, but it would help to have a rhyme scheme. overall, 7.75/10. I don't like it ...

*mumbles something incoherent. you think i say something or other to do with Eragon not really being that bad of a book, but you're still not sure.* "What did you ...

So, you think you can get through five hundred pages of crap, do you? Vicky was very adamant(not sure if i spelled that right...) in saying "PLEASE STOP READING THIS!" ...

umm...how do i write poetry...little elves in my head take out an anvil and hammer and tongs and furnace and metal and start forging vague ideas. then they pass those ...