oneeyedunicornhunter

alright, i didn't finish, but i will later. if you're going to stick with present tense, STAY CONSISTENT. the beginning was all over the place.

good poem. nothing too deep, really just an expression of strong feelings, which is fine of course. i wasn't blown away, but this really was good. it would have been ...

haha! vernon, hate to break it to you, but when water falls on trees, it just MIGHT be described as pounding! ;-) thanks for the compliments, amber.

Awww. That was sad. :smt010 If I see him, I would be gladly to smile. I don't really care how someone looks. If they're nice to me, I will talk ...

alright, i didn't want to, but i thought i'd bump this poem for three reasons: 1)i revised it a bit 2)i didn't get many reviews... 3)i will donate 50 points ...

haven't attempted a sonnet in at least a year...very hard. you're rhyming wasn't perfect, but that's really in my opinion the least important part of a poem. just part of ...

very cool poem...it's rare that something like this flows, but it did. very well, i might add. not quite sure what you were saying with it, though. as for it ...

well...this was interesting, but there was nothing here that made me want to slow down and think about what you meant...still, this was good. i wasn't crazy about the ending. ...

wow...this was awesome. your stanzas (or whatever) were short and blunt, and that made the point go home with me every line. sometimes the world needs a good slap in ...

AHH you started new sentences in the middle of lines. i am not pleased with this fact. :x i also felt like i was reading one big rant about america. ...

i'm sorry, i've written some pretty bad poems in my day...but this one wasn't really all that great. people say they liked the rhyme scheme, but there was no 'scheme', ...

ahhh i love riddles... but i have absolutely no idea what the answer to this one is.

well, i can give some examples of technologies we could be using very shortly... 1)41(or something like that) calibur sniper rifles--super powerful, each shot calculated, everything taken into account

no explanation this time. unless you count the explanation for the lack of explanation? :? well, here it is. ______ reread it, found some punctuation errors. ______ changed one of ...

alright, since your the second person to ask, i'll just say right here: no, i'm not writing more on this. i leave you here to wonder and speculate. not all ...