oneeyedunicornhunter

wow...this poem was so boring, i found it hard to read the whole thing. please learn to write before you post again. haha, just kiddin'. this was pretty good, really ...

king, i know the story is vague. i never called my readers morons. and i did mention that i WAS in fact thinking about taking you guys' advice. your suggestion ...

what i literally meant by that line was that many people reject failure--the 'failure is not an option' mentality. 'games' really refers to 'wars'. that's it! all i was saying ...

'peaces' does make sense. surely if you realize that i was comparing wars to 'games', you would be able to make sense of the word 'peaces'. *sigh*...it's really quite frustrating ...

well. just goes to show: there's always someone who has it worse than you do. i don't have any experience in this department (fortunately!), but perhaps if you told a ...

hmm. this will be interesting. i'm planning my photo already...(photo because i'm not really that good at any of the other things...:-P) *thinks 'till brain hurts* oh yeah. i have ...

your icon is barfing up a rainbow. :shock: my life will never be the same. as for the poem, i liked being forced to imagine having to kill someone i ...

umm...what? that poem was like eating american cheese with red wine--it just didn't make sense. i'm proud of that analogy. 8) anyway, this could be a cool poem. just...expand. and..*yawn*...try ...

yeah, everything was covered before. it's childish, but childhood is important! childhood is the best part of life. everything is a mystery, learning is easy and fun, there are no ...

wow. this was so awesome, i don't even want to critique it. really, the story was engrossing, the rythm was sound even when you deviated from the rhyme scheme, and ...

for once i have to agree with vernon. you don't have punctuation! :lol: other than that, i completely disagree. this wasn't anything extraordinarily original, but it was good. here's a ...

:D thanks for the Golden Star and compliments (especially the compliments). i'm impressed you understood what it was about. don't tell anyone! ;-) love your sig by the way. the ...

really cool poem. didn't really understand the second part: "Crimson ice Frozen like tear-spears (is this 'tear' as in 'rip' or 'tear' as in " :'( "?) Waiting for heat ...

this is my first free-verse. some people have recommended i try it, because apparently rhyming, no matter how orderly i try to make it, seems forced to some here on ...

conrad rice...the MC was a man. :lol: alright, alright! you guys win. since nobody understands what the message of this story was (or even what's actually going on) i'm going ...