oneeyedunicornhunter

Very interesting rant. Are a vegetarian/vegan? (I'm the first one. :D) Killing animals for luxury is totally unnecessary. It's like mass murdering terrorist. Should we do it to them just ...

Interesting thoughts, and I agree for the most part. People write what they know, the new things they experience and ideas they think are all their own. To some people, ...

Hooray! I'm the first male to post a comment. Don't know why I'm so excited about it, it happens all the time. And has anyone noticed that guys on this ...

haha! Very humorous and definitely quite cheeky. It's actually a very good thing you break the rules, because sometimes rules inhibit great ideas. Besides, rules were made to be broken. ...

I have no idea what this is or why you posted it. I think you should delete it. Hopefully I'm not being too harsh, but YWS isn't for junk like ...

To your question about whether or not anyone got it yet, the answer is no. Great guesses so far, and all on the right track. Eimear seems to be the ...

Hmmm...I'm reminded of Dragonriders of Pern. How were the anesthetics administered? Surely a needle wouldn't penetrate the tough hide of a dragon! I haven't read any of the other ones, ...

On your request, GryphonFledgling, I have explained my religious beliefs in more detail. I also decided to go more into my vegetarianism. I think you'll find my logic very convincing... ...

rhyming kills this poem. It makes it feel contrived and forced--focus on emotion first. I'd recommend you try free verse until you find your 'voice'--then you can go back to ...

This seems more like private strings of thought and reflections than a non-fiction. perhaps this could be moved to somewhere more appropriate. Especially the series of questions at the end. ...

enzoguy15, please don't just copy someone else's response. As for the article, "Talent and hard work are what normally feed and clothe you." Change the 'you' to 'most people'. As ...

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This was really good, but I would leave the explanation out at the end. By the time I reread it, I had already understood what you were writing about. I ...

okay, good, you fixed the chatspeak. i personally have nothing against it, it's just that the rules require it. this was mildly funny, but not what i'd call "hilarious". the ...

i think the line breaks were choppy. you could definitely improve the flow just by changing that. as for the poem, i didn't really relate to much of it. the ...