oneeyedunicornhunter

First off, I'd like to say that your signature is great...'specially 'cause it's true. :-P The poem was vague, and that leaves it very open for personal interpretation. I'm not ...

Hmmm...mysterious, and yet it has a nice resolution (if death can be called "nice"). I have to go now, but i will elaborate when i come back in a few ...

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It's sad that some schools really can't afford to spend time to help smooth over in-school rivalries or stop bullying, and it's even sadder when they have a staff that ...

Well when i saw the title, i thought "that sounds random...CLICK IT!" I wasn't expecting anything so deep. The tone of sadness was never lost, but with the camels and ...

Pattycakes is right, you need to italicize the flashbacks. I was unsure for half of the story if Cormac was a guy or a girl. :-P As for the story, ...

Shakespeare??? D: Sorry. 3/10. You need a quote from someone awesome like...I dunno...me! :) i'd give you a 10/10 then.

This was a decent poem. The part i liked best about it is obviously how I can relate to it. The ideas were expressed well, but structure and flow could ...

It seemed like you were seperating the sentences into different lines at random points...for example, the first four lines: "The daemon claws at the closed door, Gurgling noises escaping from ...

I saw the title and subtitle and said, "Riding asteroids? I gotta read this!" The humor was great, and I was interested almost immediately. It seemed like you thought out ...

8) This thought has occurred to others as well, Demeter. It's a mystery that will never be solved.

Hahaha! Very original. Loved the ending especially, but you mistyped "constructed". I'm not quite sure what some of it means...the second stanza's meaning was completely lost on me, for example. ...

Hmmm. Yes, I must concur, this poem is abstract. It flowed nicely, didn't waste time elaborating(as SOME people are known to do on YWS...won't mention any names, you all know ...

Yeah, umm...what? *scratches head* After staring at this poll for more than five minutes (it was akin to staring down the barrel of a loaded gun in the hands of ...

Vegetarians rise!!! :D I think you might be interested in a site I found: I'm not sure how accurate the information they give is, but it definitely had a huge ...