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Re: Word Game
a friend of mine
Wed Dec 24, 2008 6:47 pm -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
You guys are all so pretty! Here's me at a nanowrimo write-in
Wed Dec 24, 2008 6:40 pm -
Re: Rate the Profile Picture Above You
8/10 cute :D
Wed Dec 24, 2008 6:15 pm -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
ok, so here's me at a nanowrimo write-in :D I kind of look like a devil with the viking horns and red eye :shock:
Wed Dec 24, 2008 6:35 am -
Re: Exile: Chapter 2
I laughed. The brown horse below me made a noise , [s]which[/s] indicat[s]ed[/s] ing its approval. My plan was to ride north[s]wards[/s], seeking an easy crossing across the river to ...
Wed Dec 24, 2008 6:11 am -
Re: Exile: Chapter 1
I think that you have something going here, it's really interesting so far. I do have one suggestion though. It seems a bit fast paced, there isn't much character development ...
Wed Dec 24, 2008 5:50 am -
Re: Wind Blown Heart
Hey The.Dreamwalker, welcome to YWS! So, this I found to be very very excellent. It's so descriptive and flows so easily. Great job!! A few things though (sorry this is ...
Wed Dec 24, 2008 5:26 am -
Re: Wild Ride
Hey, welcome to YWS FountainousQuill! This was really great! Just some nit-picks though: It wasn't that I minded too much - but by the time I finished [s]up[/s], I'd miss ...
Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:32 am -
Re: Never can seem to finish ):
Thank you guys so much!! That was a LOT of help! :D Maki-Chan: I'll try to post it, but it's so rough that it'll take me a while to edit/post ...
Tue Dec 23, 2008 11:34 pm -
Re: Invisible
Thank you guys so much! :D That's a lot of help
Tue Dec 23, 2008 11:09 pm -
Re: Random Modeling
These pictures are fantastic, but I agree with springrain2693 on the first one, it's definitely needs to be the other way instead of sideways. Then for the second one, if ...
Tue Dec 23, 2008 2:52 am -
Re: Invisible
Um, so these are my first attempt at lyrics, hope you like them! :D ~~~~~~~ [slow strumming on acoustic guitar] my mind, my mind is so open yet it always ...
Tue Dec 23, 2008 2:27 am -
Re: Never can seem to finish ):
It always seems like every story I start I just don't finish. Be it I'm uninterested, I'm stuck, or I just really can't stand the story anymore. This has been ...
Tue Dec 23, 2008 2:06 am -
Re: Secrret chapter one
Hey shadowed_mist, This is a really great story, but does need some polishing, so: Some things: So [s]I[/s] as I crawled out of my window with my backpack clinging to ...
Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:26 am -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
I'm back! (Haven't been on for months :cry: )
Mon Dec 22, 2008 11:44 pm
