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Hello! This was a very cute story and I could definitely see it becoming a great children's story. The thing is though, as others have mentioned previously, there is no ...

Hello! This was a great read, I'm really interested in what happens next ;) I love how well this flows and how it's humorous even though it's about someone getting ...

This is old....don't review it unless you really want to. Edited version can be found here: :P _____ When I finally came back to reality from my hazy meditating state, ...

Hello :) So, after reading this I am very interested in seeing where it will go, you definitely have a great idea for a plot going. I do agree with ...

Hello! This was a great read, I'm very interested in seeing where this will go. ;) Here are some nitpicks: She had killed for this spot. She wasn’t letting it ...

This is old....don't review it unless you really want to. Edited version can be found here: :P CHAPTER ONE The air was hot and sticky, I was sitting out on ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS :) This was interesting but you definitely need to get some punctuation in here....specifically quotation marks. There is a lot of telling in your story as ...

I kind of missed the bright red "This was written by my 8 year old" just like addicted2theshindigg haha. So...seeing how this isn't your work, I'm not really sure how ...

This was an excellent read, you utilize a fantastic vocabulary along with sentences that flow very well. The thing that I would have liked to see more in this prologue ...

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( :) me too) um... banana

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8/10 cute!

8/10 it's cool :)

These are really cool pics! I especially like the third one. It seems like you had a good Summer :) What is that last one of? It looks really cool ...