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Alright awesome!! I'm excited to read it :) PM me when it's up.

If you could edit this and give me your first impressions that would be fantastic!! It's been a long time since I've written anything and I'm trying to get back ...

Hello! I really enjoyed reading this :D I felt as though I could imagine everything that was happening vividly because of your descriptions. I like the friendship that the Lord ...

Hello! This was very, very interesting. I was definitely hooked within the first few paragraphs. The wine turned a blood red as the poison was pored into it. Placing the ...

Hello! I really loved this! It was very poetic and beautifully bittersweet. I like how it's so realistic, and you can easily relate to the main character. Also, this flowed ...

Hello! This was very intriguing, and very sad. But, I think that I agree with seems very rushed and it makes the reader have a hard time finding out if ...

Wow. This was - this was AMAZING! I really don't think that I'll be able to "tear it apart" like you wanted but I'll tell you what my thoughts on ...

Hello! This was so intense! I loved it! Very, very sad. You have a great way of building up the action and describing the carnage that war has caused. What ...

Hello! This was so perfectly bittersweet. I haven't read the previous chapters but I didn't really need to to understand what was going on, which is fantastic! I really enjoyed ...

Hello! This was a very intriguing story and I didn't want it to end so fast! So, here's some nit-picks: I couldn’t say that I wasn’t expecting it. The moment ...

I really hope I can win this year...I've done it for two years now and have gotten so close, but no cigar )=

I absolutely LOVE the first picture, it's a simple kind of beauty that's really just fascinating. I also love the close ups of the flowers, but I think that you ...

I absolutely love these pictures and I can't really think of any way that you could improve on them. I love the texture and vibrant colors, it just looks fantastic. ...

Hello! Fantastic pictures!! :D 1. I love this one a lot. Maybe try cropping it a teensy bit on the right side though to get rid of the footprint that ...

Hello! This was a very interesting story and I was very intrigued by it. You have a way of keeping the reader's attention. I'm not really a fan of how ...