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Thank you so much for the help! Kitty 15 - I was too full of bitterness towards this stupid town. I'm really confused, I thought that it was proper grammar ...

Wow! That was REALLY good! I agree with smorgishborg. :D

Animals everyone is afraid of: 1. Rats 2. Snakes 3. Spiders 4. Pitbulls 5. Crocodiles :smt106

It was really good just a few things you might want to change. Meghan turned around. "It's that obvious?" "I'm afraid so" I was kind of confused by this - ...

London isn't so great. Trust me. It's polluted, dangerous and people here are generally unhappy. And rude Well, I think America's the same, and to add on to it - ...

Granted, but they're only two inches, worthless, and considered a deformity I wish that I had a boyfriend

See through-ish

Okay thanks, I edited it, I hope that's better. I did have tabs when I copied and pasted, but I guess that didn't work (this is my first post)

yeah, i agree with twit.

I really liked the idea of it, very funny! I agree with canislupis and twit in their revisions.

Hi, I'd really appreciate it if you could review this. :D There isn't really any fantasy in this section, but my story is fantasy. There may be a few typos ...

^ Knows how to spell llamas the correct way < Has never seen an actual llama in her life. V Will probably be madhatter, because he is on every single ...

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Ugh! Banned for being mean. :cry: (JK)