onceuponatim3xo

I started to write this story one way, but decided to start over and change it some. You can't really tell that it's fantasy yet - but it is :D ...

Descriptions DEFINITELY help! :D Try to describe things more (but not too much!) not only does it make your story longer, but better. :D

This was really good, but I agree with Lancrist - the letter part mixed in with the aunt's behavior seemed very Harry Potter-ish. The way you can easily fix that ...

I think its called The 3 A.M. Epiphany its really good though. It's a book full of writing excercises and it really really really good! It teaches you how to ...

Those were really good, I liked them! There are just a few spelling typos that you might want to fix, and you should try to find another word for red ...

That is really good! My only suggestion is that you could seperate this part: Put your hand in mine. Never let go. I'm losing control and it's all that I ...

This is really good! It is very powerful (as Fangala the Flying Feline had pointed out) but I also think that some parts of it are a bit wordy. Other ...

This is really good, but it doesn't really have a rhythym to it - it's more like a story with a few words taken out. My suggestion is to read ...

Tinfoil Hat

This was extremely good and had a wonderful moral! Just a few things though: #4: I wonder why it is [s]was[/s] here then? #1: Me? Because I don't want it. ...

steps

thank you sooo much for all of the help! Like Minniax, I have motivation problems with every story I write (recently). It's really annoying because its probably even worse than ...

Albert Einstein

thank you soo much for the help!!

9/10 a great idea for a name!