onceuponatim3xo

This was good, although very fast paced, you may want to even out a few parts. Also I was a bit confused for these parts: the horsemen were nearly indistinguishable. ...

A black car

G: the G iving Tree

For this game, all that you have to do is think of something that has to do with writing - alphabetically. You could say a book title (first word in ...

an old rusty lamp

Thank you for the critique :D I'm thinking of buying Strunk and White's Elements of Style because I've heard that it helps with those kinds of things. I'm horrible with ...

I always thought that coke was better than pepsi - although now I don't really like either.

dark hair and pale face

Thank you soooo much for critiquing this! :D For the contest, the only rules were that it had to stay with the theme "I can make a difference by..." it ...

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yep, it's awesome though!

Hmmmm, Emma (pretty name!). I picture a sweet girl that's peaceful and studious, with a soft face and light hair. How about this one: Kirsten Bailey

Thank you soooo much for the extremely detailed critiques! :D I definitely need to start over, I just plunged in and I hate when I do that!

I agree with Lunatic, is awesome!!!

8/10 I like the color scheme, but its a little too dark for me