onceuponatim3xo

I still don't really get who he is. Why is he affiliated with YWS? Yeah really, why does everybody talk about him all of the time???? Why is he affiliated ...

It helps soooooo much if you space out your writing, you may have had tabs or something - but when you submitted your writing the tabs disappeared. So, you'll have ...

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This was a great piece! You had wonderful descriptions! The only thing that bothered me though, was you that really seemed to rush A LOT. I know that it's a ...

This was really quite good! Although there were a few things I saw that you could change a little: In the beginning when you say: Charles Lidlum looked up from ...

Thank you sooooo extremely much for the help! (: I realize that I've probably been the same way with my other works too, I'll have to try and stop myself ...

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I just google names! :D *I'm not sure if this is the right place to post this, you probably should have posted it in Writing Activities, or something of the ...

Hi, so I wrote this short story for my school's contest called Reflections. It's a creative arts contest and I hope this story is okay. I've already handed it in, ...

England? :shock: I'm sooooo jealous! :D Welcome to Young Writers Society (YWS) I'm sure that you'll love it here! If you have any questions feel free to PM me, although ...

Thank you soooo much for any and all critiques! :D Here's Chapter 2: CHAPTER 2 By: Onceuponatim3xo A long while later, we finally had arrived at Riveroaks. Our relatives were ...

Thank you sooo much for the help! :D I'll have to change those things. Try to show that Kirsten may have been still a little uneasy about the situation and ...

So, I've been messing around with the idea for a long time - and now I've decided on how I want the plot. If you've read my other works, they ...

I don't really know anyone in YWS that well to give them a shoutout, but I'd like to say thank you, thank you very very very much for critiquing my ...

Wow! You got me there! Oh right, phew. For a moment there I thought that there was some fancy way of getting to the stories that was the norm on ...