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8/10 I really like the colors.

Hello there! This was interesting, it made me a bit paranoid though. :) I agree with Titan4ever: face(less) book is a good title. These first few sentences confused me a ...

Aw, don't be so hard on yourself. If you need anyone to edit it when it's back up and beautiful, then feel free to give me a PM. No story ...

Hello there! This was intriguing... Tayler already summed up what I was going to say though. I did have an issue with the flow of this paragraph: No, I still ...

Hello there! This was absolutely fantastic, you need to wipe away those cobwebs for good. This flowed beautifully, I loved the mystery of the ending and the imagery that you ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Be sure to check out this thread if you haven't yet: I really enjoyed reading this, and I am very interested in seeing where this will ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Be sure to check out this thread. I enjoyed reading this, it kept my attention, but there were a few things that I'd like to mention. ...

Hello! When I read this I really felt as though I could connect to it. It sums up a lot of desires and hopes for love that many girls wish ...

Oh, I just realized that you posted this twice. I was so confused, I thought that my review had somehow gotten deleted. Best of luck with your story, let me ...

Hello! This was interesting, it definitely has some potential. What you really need to work on though is the amount of dialogue you have. There is just way too much ...

Kyllorac, that book is hilarious! If you look around on the website you can find the lulu address and read the first chapter. It's so awful.

Hello! Welcome to YWS :) Honestly, I am thoroughly confused by what is going on here. Here's some things you really need to work on; first off, the story begins ...

Hello! Might you be able to review We All Are Birds. ? It's kind of long, I apologize. Also it's more of a realistic fiction, (a story of adolescence, rebellion, ...

Your voice is absolutely gorgeous!! I loved listening to this song and never wanted it to end. Fantastic job! You're so talented, what with the violin, piano, singing and all...

I wrote this as an exercise from a book called: The 3 A.M. Epiphany. (I actually wrote it at 3am too) :) Rules were that it had to be 600 ...