onceuponatim3xo

Granted, but then you choke on it and die I wish that I could make up my mind on everything

Hi Eimear, Welcome to YWS! :D That's great that you've started writing, you should tell your parents about it - writing may not be a stable career, but it can ...

I don't get it... but 10/10 anyway

7/10, I like the black and white

hahaha that's so funny!

Onceuponatim3xo sips her hot chocolate and chats with omgafilangi (Emily). They discuss how popular their name is and while they are doing so someone shouts "Emily!" and both turn to ...

hahaha I loved your post, it made me laugh, (not at you) I agree with you, I think that the U.S. should try to help it's own people FIRST - ...

Hahaha I loved that! :D I loved the Charlie part and Edward's reason for saving Bella, it was soo funny! Great job!

:cry: That was so sad. It was really good though!

I like Stephenie Meyer alot, but you gotta admit, that was pretty funny. My thoughts exactly. Although, as many people have already said, the gun thing got old. It would've ...

Good job, I like the name it flows really well.

This was good, I liked it, but it seems like you never said that the main character was a boy - I actually thought that it was a girl. (It ...

OMG! :lol: :lol: :smt082 :smt081 That was hilarious!!! I loved it, it was sooo funny! Rofl! This is brilliant. Sick and twisted, but brilliant! I haven't had that good of ...

:D Thanks for the crit, You just confirmed my doubts. I'd thought that those parts could use a little changing, but I wasn't sure how, thank you! The thing about ...

Thanks for the crit, So, do you want me to add on to the conversation, then have them lead onto the boy? Should I have them talking about things before ...