onceuponatim3xo

Just a few things: "I know, just a sweet tea then, please." This needs to match up with the following sentence that you have later on in the story; Chase ...

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omg, they're so different from what I pictured :(

Good job! :D The only thing that bothered me was the first paragraph, there were way too many outright statements and it didn't flow as well as it should. You ...

8/10

gaps of nothingness

Fortunately, the man was killed by a drunk driver

ummmm Clogging

I have no idea. Why is YWS the awessomest site on the planet?

Fortunately, she didn't really like the guy anyway

they're doing a movie???? How did you see the cast?????

Yeah, I barely put anything symbolic in my writing - so if I publish something, people will say "oh the main character picked up the cup of pudding because she ...

Ok, good :D But, please send everyone a PM to let us know when your doing it!!

NYC is awesome, but I've never been to San Francisco - I've heard that it's really rainy there (but maybe I'm thinking of seattle, I'm not sure :lol: ) and ...

I think that the teachers/school like it because of the symbolic-ness in it. It's supposed to be all about fear of the unknown, and how violent a man can be. ...