onceuponatim3xo

This EXTREMELY long! If you separated it into two parts, I can guarantee you that you'll get more crits. I read a little bit of it and it and I ...

Excellent job! My stomach was churning as if I were in the story with them. The only thing that I had a problem with is that - it's kind of ...

I rather like getting reamed on reviews, helps me. If you do want people to be harsh, then before each story or poem just say that you would like the ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! :D I love the twilight series too, I'm so depressed that the next book is coming out in August, that's too far! Which is your favorite ...

Good Job, I'm very interested to see what happens. You did make a few mistakes that I'd like to point out though. The bold shows words that you should either ...

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I'm thinking about changing my story to third person instead of from Holly's point of view. Should I or would it not make it any easier/better and I'd be doing ...

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Thanks for the help :D I'm probably going to have to switch my story to third person un/limited :? -Onceuponatim3xo

Michigan, really? :D I live in MI too. What city do you live in or around? I'm about 30 or 45 minutes north of Detroit, (can't remember how long it ...

I feel like my stories are so short! Word count is about 230,000. I say about because I no longer keep an eye on it. Including though the writing on ...

Um, guys? Do you realize that this was posted four years ago? Whoever wrote this will be around 14 now - a much better writer. :lol: :lol: :lol: Hahahahahaha. Wow. ...

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Well, I do want to become a computer engineer... mostly programming and robots and things... but I also want to become a writer. So I have a career choice that ...