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Hey Henry. All right, so here goes: Chapter I The name is Killer, Max Killer. I was down at the bar scoping out my target. I was hired by an ...

Thank you so much :D I have chapter two ready if anyone would like to read it.

Hey TL G-Wooster! If you could crit Eyes of the Empire I'd be so extremely greatful! You don't have to read the prologue, but if you want to you can ...

This was excelllent! I laughed so hard :lol: :lol: I was a little confused with this transition though: Of course, he managed to save himself from that particular embarrassment by ...

It was all right as far as literary techniques go, but still it was very dull and at the same time so disgusting that I couldn't read any more - ...

I might've seen that, but I can't remember :lol:

Hahaha :lol: :lol: :lol: I know it's mean to be laughing about a writer's fans, but just read these posts It's so sad that people can be this excited about ...

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What are you talking about? All this defense and defence nonsense! The correct answer is most obviously Bob!!

About two nights ago, I had a dream that I was going to a YWS Headquarters kind of place where all the people on YWS came to meet eachother, hang ...

This was really good! So good, that I was only able to catch one thing: The [s]cirrus-streaked[/s] sky darkened as a thick haze rose from the [s]bloody[/s] ground. This sentence ...

This was really good :D I like how you portray Bella, it's just like how she is except a lot less annoying. One thing that you might want to change, ...

Quote this. Because I'm goody-two-shoes. You get a dime. Prok gets no dime. This is my third attempt. Please, no one beat me to the punch this time. EDIT: Yay! ...

This was extremely good!! I loved it :D You have such great descriptions and character development. I feel bad that I can't really contribute much editing since I found absolutely ...

Here's chapter one if you want to read it. You don't have to, but if you don't you probably won't understand the first few paragraphs :) I hope you like ...