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What happens!?!?!?!?!?! I can't wait to find out what happens! :o You have me completely hooked so take a bow, that was very good. Just a few things... "Oh, right. ...

I loved it! Its was such a great story. I am enjoying it more and more as the story progresses. Your characters are interesting and they are ready to keep ...

You did what a prologue is suppose to do, I want to read more. You have me interested and I can't wait to find out what happens. Two things though, ...

Yay! The eight chapter! Your writing was good as always and your plot line is as addicting as ever. Just a few things... “Well don’t be mad at me too! ...

I am so sorry! It was so hard for me to concentrate on your story with all the slang...Other then that, nice story. You gave it you own twist with ...

I just read all seven chapters and I would just like to say that this story is simply... griping It really is amazing and it was the highlight of my ...

Ihighton: Thank you so much for reviewing my piece. I will work on making my paragraphs shorter(this is a constant struggle for me) You are much too kind! I actually ...

The mistake I saw has already been pointed out so there is nothing left for me to say but... Nice story! I like the setting and it was just enough ...

Okay, so this is my first part of the first story that I have deemed good enough to be read by the extremely talented people here so...I hope you enjoy ...

*Gasp* Well I was ready to be whisked away after you first described him playing his violin. You were really able to convey how much he loved playing and what ...

Okay, so it was really cute! I didn't really like that they were 18...I mean a twizzler? Maybe I am just a hopeless romantic. There are a few grammar errors ...

*Falls on floor laughing* Wow, thank you. This is great, like a breath of fresh air. You can get a little tired of reading about things and its all perfect. ...

That was really good. I enjoyed it a lot. I like the story a lot, and you give good insight into Julia's mind. There are a few grammer errors but ...

That was really great. Your descriptions of things are great, its like a breath of fresh air, I can see everything so vividly and crisply. All of the critic points ...

hey everyone! my name is amanda and i just joined!